ozran
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"Now you see, Lone Starr, that evil will always triumph, because good is dumb"
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Post by ozran on Aug 17, 2005 14:38:23 GMT -5
here she is in the morning, every day when I wake up, There to tell me her problems until my ears turn to dust.
Like a peacock without a friend, She sweetly talks without and end.
Like an Oprea play gone mad, Like the howling wind gone sad, Like a song that never stops, Like running your ears till they drop.
Poor sweet soul killing thoughs around slowly Poor killer dove that flys too soft.
Like sweeping a dusty road to clean, Like living in a life long dream, Like trying to jump to the moon, Like a missing piece of funature in the room.
Chatter is her music she plays all day, Until her friends and family leave and refuse to stay,
Too sad to live, but this story is true, The moral of this story is dont let it happen to you.
Ozran
====================== Now this might seem kind of mean, but this poem is about my mother and how much she seems to talk about pointless things that people really dont wanna hear about but listen to her because they dont wanna be rude or make her feel bad.
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Post by Ringo on Aug 17, 2005 18:07:54 GMT -5
"Too sad to live, but this story is true, The moral of this story is dont let it happen to you."
It is too sad that it is happening to you!
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ozran
New Writer
"Now you see, Lone Starr, that evil will always triumph, because good is dumb"
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Post by ozran on Aug 17, 2005 23:51:07 GMT -5
Hum... more like the people im living with.
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Post by Ringo on Aug 18, 2005 10:46:38 GMT -5
So in the last line of the poem are you referring to your mom? or other people who have to live with her?
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ozran
New Writer
"Now you see, Lone Starr, that evil will always triumph, because good is dumb"
Posts: 45
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Post by ozran on Aug 20, 2005 13:40:54 GMT -5
Its talking to the people that have to live with her. Aslo my dad
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Eli Enchanted
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I'm forced to fake a laugh, a smile everyday of my life.broken up inside
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Post by Eli Enchanted on Aug 20, 2005 15:42:53 GMT -5
Does she know that she drives friends and family away?
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ozran
New Writer
"Now you see, Lone Starr, that evil will always triumph, because good is dumb"
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Post by ozran on Aug 21, 2005 19:40:15 GMT -5
She kind of does, but .... she doesnt want to belive it. Its kinda of like. Shes in her own little world
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Post by Ringo on Aug 21, 2005 19:53:06 GMT -5
A lonely world!
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ozran
New Writer
"Now you see, Lone Starr, that evil will always triumph, because good is dumb"
Posts: 45
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Post by ozran on Aug 21, 2005 20:22:31 GMT -5
Well.. if its lonely.... just write a poem about it. etc.
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Post by Ringo on Aug 22, 2005 9:43:19 GMT -5
If her friends and family are driven away by her uncontrollable babble, who is left for her, she is evidently alone. I have a challenge for you! Do you think you could write a poem from her point of view?
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ozran
New Writer
"Now you see, Lone Starr, that evil will always triumph, because good is dumb"
Posts: 45
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Post by ozran on Aug 22, 2005 12:59:33 GMT -5
Lol maby... but that kinda of sad... or pathedic
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Post by Ringo on Aug 22, 2005 13:38:38 GMT -5
Well...you seem to have pity for her and it seems you probably have some idea of how she feels. I am very intrigued to know what goes on in her head, to make her behave the way she does.
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