Comments, suggestions, corrections.

[Jack]

I think that's all of the storyline I'll put up for now. Chapter 14 and 16 are still in progress, though 15 is complete. As you might have noticed, this is an RP, so you can't go and credit me with writing this. I put in parentheses who the author of each segment was, though some authors have several characters and so several names.

Authors Kratos and Mithos are the same person.

Authors Onizuka, Haveti, and BioDiesel are the same. (That's me)

Authors Thanatos and Mary are the same.

Authors Cynric and Kirimisa are the same.

Kyi and Finch are the same, though I think her authorname was Kyi\\Finch throughout, so it should be pretty clear.

[ozran]

So are these authors for your RPG board? It sounds really cool and im enjoying the story.

Ozran

[Jack]

Yes, there are perhaps thirty authors in all that have contributed. The story really picks up after chapter four or so, though my favorite chapter is the fifteenth. I'm tempted to post it without the unfinished fourteenth, as most of the characters there are new ones that are being introduced and don't yet relate to the master storyline.

[Jack]

Just updated, adding chapters 14, 15, and 16. Fifteen is the only completed one, the others are in progress. I also RP for the Teradoc character.

I apologize for the delay in updating, it's been quite a struggle to keep the story alive when some of the writers seem adamant on giving up.

[Book Master]

Its fine, right now your leading the board in posts anyway.

[Jack]

That's because most of my posts are very short.

[ozran]

Its easier for me to print out books and read them. Maby you could post just chapter one in one long string so I could print it out. Anyway thats just a suggestion. Its much easier for me to read paper than the computer screen. Thanks

Ozran

[Jack]

Lol, that's not cost effective. I tried printing out my archive once, ran out of ink before the first fifty pages. The whole thing's a 1.16 megabyte .txt file. Keeps getting bigger, too.